Manuscript Critique

The manuscript critique is a less intensive version of the Developmental Editing service. 
It addresses the following issues:​
  • plot and structure
  • characters
  • point of view
  • pacing
  • setting
  • scene vs narrative summary (show vs tell)
  • dialogue

​It does not address line editing or copyediting issues such as grammar, spelling or punctuation.

The service includes:
  • an editorial report full of editorial feedback in a Microsoft Word document
  • 30 minutes of follow-up support over email or Google Meet*
  
​*Don’t worry if you're anxious about face-to-face communication. ​If you prefer, I will turn off the video function, and we'll talk as if we are having a telephone conversation.
 
Disclaimer: You will only receive an editorial report that addresses the strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript. No actual changes will be made to the manuscript.

Please note that a 20% non-refundable booking fee is required at the time of booking to secure a slot in my schedule. Read Terms and Conditions and Privacy Policy for more information.

Not sure yet?
I will happily provide you with a free sample developmental edit. Send me your completed manuscript. I will focus on the first 1,000 words and I will provide you with as much guided feedback as possible.
You will get:​
  • an editorial report with feedback focused on the first 1000 words of your manuscript