I can help you solve the big-picture issues of your story
Are you struggling with the plot of your story and can’t figure out what happens next? I can show you how to solve plot issues in your story.
Are you struggling to create believable and unique characters with realistic goals, motivations and flaws? I can show you how to create believable, realistic and relatable characters in the story you are editing right now.
Do you provide too much information/exposition that slows down the pacing of the story, and readers lose interest? I can show you how to identify unnecessary information and quicken the pacing of your story.
Are you struggling to show the romantic chemistry and advance the development of the romantic relationship between the main characters? I can read your manuscript and show you how to develop the romantic relationship between the main characters.
I provide thoughtful and actionable suggestions to help you edit and improve the big-picture issues of your story, such as:
theme
plot
characters (goal, motivation, conflict, character development)
"I first engaged Maria’s services for a partial discovery evaluation of my fantasy romance novel when I had written around three quarters of it, and later returned for a full evaluation once the manuscript was finished. Both experiences were excellent. Maria was professional, insightful, and always on time with her feedback. Her comments were thoughtful and very helpful in strengthening the manuscript and clarifying key elements of the story. She also scheduled both follow-up calls very quickly after delivering the evaluations, and we went through all of my questions while she helped me brainstorm ideas for the next steps. I highly recommend Maria to any author looking for thorough, professional, and genuinely helpful editorial feedback." First-time indie author (pre-publication)
We might be a great fit if
you are looking for a reliable and supportive developmental editor or beta reader to help you edit the big-picture issues of your story
you are writing a romance manuscript and are looking for a professional and kind romance genre specialist
you are looking for honest, thoughtful, and actionable suggestions to improve the big-picture issues of your story
you are looking for an editor that doesn't use AI to edit or beta-read your manuscript
you see the value of having a human professional editor that addresses you your strengths and weaknesses and helps you improve your writing skills (for your next books)
you are looking for an editor that does their best to improve your manuscript and respects your manuscript, privacy and confidentiality
Am I the right editor for your story?
Learn more about me and my editing services to make sure we are a good fit to work together.
"...her feedback was invaluable, especially after I had completed numerous revisions and was struggling to pinpoint where my plot issues were. I appreciated the chance to have a new and unbiased set of eyes on my manuscript. She pointed out an issue with a subplot that I had not considered before, which helped me to focus my revision efforts effectively.Her feedback was timely and thoughtful, and I'd recommend her to any fellow authors..." Kate Underwood, contemporary romance writer
"... I found it extremely helpful to have an experienced second set of eyes to verify there were no plot holes or major inconsistencies in my manuscript. ...Your communication with me was great, and you were very responsive. Thank you very much!" Rachel Anthony, romance writer
Services
For writers who need detailed feedback to help them improve their manuscript.
Get honest, thoughtful and actionable suggestions on the theme, plot, characters, point of view, pacing, setting, romance genre conventions, show vs tell, exposition, and dialogue of your story in a marked-up manuscript with suggestions and an editorial report to further guide your revision.
Get follow-up support to discuss your story (email or Google Meet).
For writers with partial or first drafts who want to see what is working or not in their story and the potential directions it could take.
Get constructive, thoughtful and actionable feedback about the things that are working well, things that are not working well, compelling elements that can be used to make the story more powerful, perspective concerns and romance genre conventions in an evaluation report.
Get follow-up support to discuss your story (email or Google Meet).
For writers who don't need thorough guidance or don’t have the budget for full developmental editing.
Get honest, helpful and actionable suggestions about the theme, plot, characters, point of view, pacing, setting, romance genre conventions, show vs tell , exposition, dialogue of your story in an editorial report.
Get follow-up support to discuss your story (email or Google Meet).
For writers who need feedback from the reader's point of view and have no idea how to improve their story.
Get honest and thoughtful feedback from the reader's point of view about the plot, characters, point of view, pacing, romance genre conventions and overall impression of the story in a reader's report.
Get follow-up support to discuss your story (email or Google Meet).
"Maria offered me feedback on my YA coming-of-age romance novel. It was clear to me that Maria read my manuscript thoroughly, and she gave me thoughtful feedback...I found her feedback useful and would recommend her..." Sophie Bernbaum, YA romance writer
Free discovery meeting
Book a free discovery meeting to discuss how I can help you solve the big-picture issues of your story and to see if we are a great fit to work together.
Fill in this form and send me your completed manuscript along with any other related documents (synopsis, summary). I will respond to you as soon as possible to discuss how I can help you improve your manuscript and provide you with a no-obligation project quote.