Developmental Editing 


Developmental editing is the first step in the editing process, and it solves the big-picture storytelling issues in your manuscript.
The Developmental Editing service addresses the following issues:​
  • plot and structure
  • characters
  • point of view
  • pacing
  • setting
  • scene vs narrative summary (show vs tell)
  • dialogue
It does not address line editing or copyediting issues such as grammar, spelling or punctuation.

The service includes:
  • a marked-up manuscript with margin suggestions (comments) in Microsoft Word
  • an editorial report full of editorial feedback as a Microsoft Word document
  • 30 minutes of follow-up support over email or Google Meet*

​*Don’t worry if you're anxious about face-to-face communication. ​If you prefer, I will turn off the video function, and we'll talk as if we are having a telephone conversation.

Disclaimer: I will not rewrite or delete large parts of your manuscript. If necessary, I will demonstrate in a separate Word document how to revise a scene to illustrate a specific principle.

Please note that a 20% non-refundable booking fee is required at the time of booking to secure a slot in my schedule. Read Terms and Conditions and Privacy Policy for more information.

Not sure yet?
I will happily provide you with a free sample developmental edit. Send me your completed manuscript. I will focus on the first 1,000 words and I will provide you with as much guided feedback as possible.
You will get:
  • a marked-up manuscript with margin suggestions up to 1,000 words
  • an editorial report with feedback focused on the first 1000 words of your manuscript