One of the most important aspects is self-editing the big-picture elements of your romance series. After finishing writing all the books, you need to self-edit the big-picture elements that cover the whole series to make sure you have written a compelling romance story with engaging characters. Read your series and take notes Story structure Characters Theme Setting and worldbuilding Romance genre conventions Next steps Read your series and take notes Read your entire romance series from start to finish. While reading, take notes in the margins of the manuscript documents and/or in a separate notebook about the big-picture elements you want to revise, such as the story structure, main characters, theme, setting and romance genre conventions. If it’s helpful, create a series outline in an Excel spreadsheet to write down your notes and ideas in a more organised way. Your series outline can include the chapter number, pov character, timeline, location, on-scene characters, and any other notes or thoughts about a particular scene. Your series outline can be as detailed as you want. You can also create or update your series bible to include updated information about your characters and create or update your master timeline to include updated information about the story’s events, and maintain consistency throughout the series. Story structure One of the most important elements that you need to self-edit is the story structure of your romance series. Identify the major romance beats of your series and the major romance beats for each book of the series. If you have trouble identifying the major romance beats for the whole series or individual books, then you need to revise your series to make your romance beats clearer and stronger. Look at your notes and write down which scenes you need to revise to make your romance story structure clearer, stronger and more compelling to the readers. If you want to learn more information, read how to outline the major plot points of your romance story. Also, make sure that your major romance beats move the plot forward and that your story includes only the necessary plot events. A lot of beginner writers make the mistake of including unnecessary plot events in the first book of their series to force important plot events in later books of the series. Look at your notes and/or manuscript and note down which scenes you need to revise to include only the necessary plot events that move the plot forward. Characters Another important element of your romance series that you need to self-edit is your main characters. Make sure that your main characters have a clear and compelling goal, believable motivation, and (internal and external) conflict throughout the series and that their actions are driven by their GMC (goal, motivation, conflict). Another person (romance interest or antagonist) who has an equal and opposite goal creates the central conflict of the story, prevents the main character from easily achieving their goal, and creates tension that moves the plot forward. When editing your series, note down what (internal conflict) or who (external conflict) is preventing the main character from achieving their goal (e.g what or who is preventing the main couple from being together?). Look at your notes and determine which scenes need to be revised for a clearer GMC and a stronger central conflict. Theme Another important element of your romance series that you need to self-edit is the theme. Generally, the theme for romance stories is that love wins over all obstacles. Romance readers expect that the main characters overcome all their flaws (internal conflict) and obstacles (external conflict) thrown at them throughout the series and live happily together. Do the main characters overcome the internal and external challenges, emotionally change throughout the series (learn the theme by the end of the story) and live happily together? Look at your notes and revise your series accordingly. Setting and worldbuilding Another important element of your romance series that you need to self-edit is the setting and the worldbuilding. Look at your notes and make sure that the setting of your story is clear, fleshed out, believable, and consistent throughout the series. Make sure that the setting is linked to the story action and the main characters. Show how the pov character notices, experiences, or describes a particular setting and what information it reveals about their personality. Look at your notes and revise any scenes with inconsistencies regarding the setting and worldbuilding of your series. Also, a common mistake writers make regarding setting is to spend too much page time describing unnecessary or irrelevant information, such as the politics and society of the world or specific locations (info dumping). Note down the scenes where info-dumping happens and revise them to include only the most relevant and important information in each scene. Romance genre conventions Another important element that you need to self-edit is the romance genre conventions. To make sure you are writing a romance series, the development of the romance relationship between the main characters needs to be at the centre of your story, and the story needs to have a happy ending where the main couple ends up together. If your series doesn’t follow these 2 romance rules, then you need to revise your romance series accordingly to include them. Also, make sure that the romance tropes used in the romance series are combined in fresh and unexpected ways to create an engaging story and contribute to the emotional and physical intimacy of the main characters. The physical attraction between the main characters needs to be apparent throughout the story, and the intimacy scenes need to serve the development of their romantic relationship and move the plot forward. Also, a common mistake writers make regarding genre conventions is the lack of romantic tension and pacing. It usually happens because the main characters fall in love too quickly without sufficient emotional development, or the romantic tension is dragged out by subplots that overshadow the central story. Look at your notes to determine if the development of the romantic relationship progresses too quickly or too slowly and revise accordingly. Next steps After you have self-edited the big-picture elements of your romance series, such as the romance story structure, characters, theme, setting, and romance genre conventions, it’s time to get feedback from a professional editor. Give your manuscript to a reliable and supportive beta reader and/or developmental editor to provide thoughtful and honest feedback about the big-picture elements of your series. If you want to learn more information, read how to find the right editor for your story. Additional resources How to self-edit the big-picture elements of your romance story How to plan and write a romance series part 1 How to edit the most common mistakes in a romance series How to avoid editing scams and find a trusted editor About the authorMaria Georgiou is a reliable and supportive developmental editor and beta reader for romance authors. She specialises in editing contemporary romance, YA romance, romantic comedy, romantic suspense, paranormal romance, fantasy romance and romantasy stories. She is a member of the EFA, ClubEdFreelancers and ALLi. Learn more about the author: About me Get in touch: Facebook, LinkedIn, Bluesky Learn about fiction editing: Resources Library and Blog Get a quote for your writing project: Get in touch with me form
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You are a romance writer wishing to plan and write a romance series. You have a great idea with a compelling main character and some major plot events figured out, but you don’t know how to plan and outline your romance series. This blog article identifies the three types of fiction series, and it analyses the story structure in a romance (dynamic) series to effectively help you plan the romance story structure of your series. Types of fiction series Romance story structure in a dynamic series Possible romance beat sheet for a trilogy series Types of fiction series Static Series The first type of fiction series is called a static series or a standalone series. The books of a static series often share a common feature, such as taking place in the same location (e.g small town) or the same group of people ( e.g family members, coworkers). Each book focuses on the development of the romantic relationship between the main characters, and each story ends with a happy ending. While characters from previous books in the series may appear in minor roles, the series can be read in any order without the reader missing important information about the characters and plot. This type of series is very popular in contemporary romance stories (workplace romance, sports romance, small town). Anthology series The second type of fiction series is called an anthology series. An anthology series typically consists of a collection of short stories or novellas by multiple writers, which are connected by a common theme ( e.g holiday romance) or setting (e.g same school, same town), but they don’t share the same storyline. Each story focuses on the development of the romantic relationship of new characters and has a happy ending. The stories can be read in any order. Dynamic series The third type of series is called a dynamic series. A dynamic series follows the same group of main characters through an overarching storyline that connects all books of the series. The focus of the series is the development of the romantic relationship of the main characters while they work together to achieve a major goal throughout the series. The books of this series need to be read in sequential order. This type of series is very popular in YA (Young Adult) romance, romantasy and fantasy romance books. Please note that the books that belong in the static or anthology series can be planned and written in a similar manner as standalone books. Please visit my resources library if you are looking for useful blog articles that will help you plan, write and edit a standalone romance book. This blog article will focus on explaining how to plan and write a dynamic romance series (connecting books in a series). Romance story structure in a dynamic series You have decided to write a storyline that spans multiple books and want to write a well-structured series with a solid beginning, middle, and end. The best way to do that is to plan the structure of your romance series and track your story’s romance beats. Start by planning the 5 major romance beats of your romance series’ structure, the emotional arc of your main characters and any significant changes in your world. These are the 5 major romance beats of a romance series: 1) Meet Cute (10%) This is the first major romance beat. It is the inciting incident that happens to the main character and introduces them to a new world. It is often called the “meet cute” because the main characters meet for the first time, or they appear on the page for the first time together. 2) No Way 2 (20%) The second major romance beat occurs at the beginning of Act 2, when the main character decides to leave the status quo and enter a new world. In this beat, the main characters repeat their belief (internally or externally) that they will not fall in love with each other. They are reluctant to spend time together and to fall in love because of their internal conflict, but they are thrown into situations where they are stuck together, and they gradually become emotionally and physically closer. Midpoint of Love (50%) The third major romance beat occurs in the middle, and it changes the direction of the story. In this beat, the main characters are no longer denying their feelings for each other. They are willing to internally change and (falsely) believe that they will be able to overcome the internal challenges (internal conflict) and external obstacles (external conflict) that are keeping them apart and have their happily ever after. Retreat (75%) The fourth major romance beat occurs at the lowest point of the romance story. In this romance beat, the main characters choose fear instead of love, and they break up or separate because they believe they will emotionally hurt themselves or the other person. Their doubts and fears make them retreat from what they really want, and they believe that their internal conflict is becoming true. Catharsis (80%) The fifth major romance beat occurs at the beginning of Act 3, where the main character chooses love and happiness this time. The main character learns the theme of the story and successfully overcomes their internal conflict. They come up with a plan, often with the help of friends and family, and they are willing to fix things the right way and get back together with their loved one. Possible romance beat sheet for a trilogy series Most romance writers who choose to write a dynamic series write a trilogy (three books in a series). This is a romance beat sheet for a trilogy series: Book 1 = Series Act 1, Romance beats: Meet Cute Book 2 = Series Act 2, Romance beats: No Way 2, Midpoint of Love, Retreat Book 3 = Series Act 3, Romance beats: Catharsis Feel free to experiment with the five major romance beats and adjust them to fit your series. Use the series structure outlined above as a guideline to help you plan and track the major events of your romance series. Don’t follow rigid guidelines or exact percentages. Do what you see best to create a compelling story. Figure out the major romance beats your romance series first, and then plan and outline the 15 romance beats for each book in the series to create a complete and compelling story with a beginning, middle and end. If you want to learn more information about outlining the romance beats of your story, read How to write a novel using Romancing the Beat. Conclusion This blog article analyses the three types of fiction series: static series, anthology series, and dynamic series and explains the major romance beats for a romance series. Read How to Plan and Write a Romance Series, Part 2 (coming soon) to learn more information about planning the main characters, the setting and worldbuilding and the romance genre conventions of a romance series and making a writing plan that will successfully help you write your books. Additional resources How to write a novel using the 3-act structure How to write a novel using Romancing the Beat How to outline the 5 major plot points of your romance story How to edit the most common big-picture issues in a romance series About the authorMaria Georgiou is a reliable and supportive developmental editor and beta reader for romance authors. She specialises in editing contemporary romance, YA romance, romantic comedy, romantic suspense, paranormal romance, fantasy romance and romantasy stories. She is a member of the EFA, ClubEdFreelancers and ALLi. Learn more about the author: About me Get in touch: Facebook, LinkedIn, Bluesky Learn about fiction editing: Resources Library and Blog Get a quote for your writing project: Get in touch with me form Do you find the process of planning a whole novel overwhelming? Do you find it difficult to establish an outlining routine, or are you not sure how to outline the structure of your romance manuscript? Instead of outlining all the plot points of your romance story at once, which can be tiring and overwhelming, I recommend outlining first the 5 major plot points of a romance manuscript’s structure: the Catalyst, Break Into 2, Midpoint, All is Lost and Break Into 3. Catalyst Break Into 2 Midpoint All is Lost Break Into 3 How should I outline my romance story if I have multiple main characters? Catalyst (10%) The first major plot point of a romance story is the inciting incident that happens to the main character and introduces them to a new world. In romance stories, it is often called the “meet cute” because the main characters meet for the first time, or they appear on the page for the first time together. The pov character is physically attracted to the other person and vividly describes their physical appearance. The pov character internally thinks the reasons (internal conflict) they cannot fall in love, and they emotionally reject them. Break Into 2 (20%) The second major plot point occurs at the beginning of Act 2, when the main character decides to leave the status quo and enter into a new world. The main character leaves their comfort zone and enters an unknown world or a new way of thinking. At the beginning of Act 2, the main characters are reluctant to spend time together and to fall in love because of their internal conflict, but they are thrown into situations where they are stuck together, and they come emotionally and physically closer. Midpoint (50%) The third major plot point takes place in the middle of the story, and it is the plot point where the main character realises their romantic feelings. The main character is willing to change and falsely believes they will be able to overcome the internal conflict that is keeping them back from emotionally opening themselves and having their happily ever after. This is the plot point where you raise the stakes and put more obstacles and challenges to the main character to emotionally change. All is Lost (75%) The fourth major plot is the lowest point of the romance story. It is the scene where the main character chooses fear instead of love, and they break up because they believe they will emotionally hurt each other because of their internal conflict. *There are many romance novels that don’t include an actual breakup scene since some romance readers don’t like it. It’s up to you whether you want to include one in your story. You can choose instead to temporarily separate the main characters so that they can see how miserable their life is without each other. Break Into 3 (80%) The fifth major plot point occurs at the beginning of Act 3, where the main character chooses love this time and wants to be happy. They come up with a plan on the steps they need to take (with the help of family and friends) to reconcile with the other character and to fix the problems they have created the right way. How should I outline my romance story if I have multiple main characters? The first step to outlining your romance story is to decide the number of main characters. In romance novels, the main characters (the main couple) are the pov characters of the story. Some romance writers choose to have only one main character, while others choose to have two main characters. If the second character has equal page time and character development with the main character, then you probably have two main characters in your story. If your romance story has one main character, you need to create one outline sheet, starting by writing down the five major plot points of your story. If your romance story has 2 main characters that experience the majority of the story together, then create one outline sheet for both of them. If your romance story has 2 main characters that don’t experience the majority of the story together, but still have some shared chapters, create a separate outline sheet for each main character. Conclusion The five major plot points will help you outline the basic structure of your romance manuscript in an easy and simple way. Brainstorm and write down the five major plot points first before outlining the rest of them in your outline sheet. Take as much time as you need to plan your romance story and write down as many details as you want. Your outline sheet can include brief bullet points or long paragraphs. Have fun and enjoy writing! Additional resources How to write a novel using the 3-act structure How to write a novel using Romancing the Beat What is a romance story and how to write one How to write a romance novel in 5 steps About the authorMaria Georgiou is a reliable and supportive developmental editor and beta reader for romance authors. She specialises in editing contemporary romance, YA romance, romantic comedy, romantic suspense, paranormal romance, fantasy romance and romantasy stories. She is a member of the EFA, ClubEdFreelancers and ALLi. Learn more about the author: About me Get in touch: Facebook, LinkedIn, Bluesky Learn about fiction editing: Resources Library and Blog Get a quote for your writing project: Get in touch with me form November marks the month of the year when many writers sit down in front of their computers and attempt to write 50,000 words in 30 days. Although this tradition started with NaNoWriMo, many writers have participated in a similar writing challenge this year. They either created their own writing challenge with writer friends or participated in a writing challenge by other writers, and found themselves a welcoming and supportive writing community. November is over, and now you have the first draft of your novel completed or the 50,000 words of it. The next step you need to take after writing the first draft is to self-edit the big-picture elements of your story. Take a break Read your manuscript and take notes Main characters Plot and structure Setting and worldbuilding Follow through with your plan Next steps Take a break The first step of self-editing your novel is to leave it rest for at least one month. Taking a break from your story is necessary to put distance between yourself and your story and be able to see your manuscript from a reader’s perspective during the editing process. Read your manuscript and take notes The second step in self-editing your story is to read through your manuscript. Schedule 2-3 days of uninterrupted time to read your manuscript from start to finish and take notes about the big-picture elements of your story. As you are reading your story, take notes in the margins of the manuscript document or in a separate notebook and write down any ideas you have on how to improve the main characters, plot and structure, and setting and worldbuilding of your story. Main characters One of the most important big-picture elements of your story is your main characters. The main characters in romance stories are the love interests of the story. The most important things you have to establish about your main characters are their goal, motivation, and internal and external conflicts. Create a character profile about each main character (if you haven’t already), and identify the following elements:
Plot and structure Another important big-picture element of your story is your plot and structure. If you are a plotter, then you probably already have an outline of your story or even a chapter-by-chapter summary. If you haven’t updated your outline while writing your story, this is a good time to do it. While you are reading your story, open an Excel spreadsheet and write down important information about each chapter of your story to help you see the “forest”, the overall plot of your story. The Excel spreadsheet can include the:
You can also write down margin comments in your manuscript document about specific issues that you want to improve in a particular scene. Check if your plot follows the 3-act structure and if each chapter moves forward the plot of the story. Setting and worldbuilding Another important big-picture element (often neglected by writers) is the setting and worldbuilding of the story. While reading your manuscript, write down the following information about the setting of your story:
If you are writing a paranormal romance or fantasy romance story that takes place in a fictional setting, you might also want to pay attention to the worldbuilding of your story. Some worldbuilding elements might greatly influence the plot and the characters of your story, so you might need to note down:
Follow through with your plan Congratulations. You have finished reading through your manuscript, and now you have made various notes about the characters, plot and structure and setting and worldbuilding of your story. You have made notes in character profiles, Excel spreadsheets and in the manuscript document, and you have plenty of ideas on what aspects of your manuscript to improve. Now, it’s time to make a plan on how to implement these changes. Don’t try to fix all the big-picture elements of your story at the same time, since it will be overwhelming and you will soon feel lost trying to juggle multiple tasks at the same time. Instead, do multiple rounds of editing for the big-picture elements of your story:
Next steps After self-editing the big-picture elements of your story, it’s time to hire a professional developmental editor. A developmental editor is the first editor writers look for after self-editing their novel. The developmental editor addresses the manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses and provides honest and constructive feedback about the story’s plot and structure, character development, point of view, pacing, setting, genre conventions, scene vs narrative summary (show vs tell) and dialogue. The developmental editor provides margin comments in the manuscript document and an editorial report to further guide the author. If you are looking for a reliable and supportive developmental editor or beta reader for your romance story, then I might be a great fit for your manuscript! I can provide honest and constructive feedback to help you improve the big-picture elements of your story and achieve your writing goals. Check out my editing services: developmental editing, manuscript critique, discovery draft evaluation, beta reading and contact me to discuss your story. Additional resources Why you need to create character profiles for your story How to write a romance story using the 3 structure How to write the setting and worldbuilding of your story What are the different types of editing services How to find the right editor for your fiction book About the authorMaria Georgiou is a reliable and supportive developmental editor and beta reader for romance authors. She specialises in editing contemporary romance, YA romance, romantic comedy, romantic suspense, paranormal romance, fantasy romance and romantasy stories. She is a member of the EFA, ClubEdFreelancers and ALLi. Learn more about the author: About me Get in touch: Facebook, LinkedIn, Bluesky Learn about fiction editing: Resources Library and Blog Get a quote for your writing project: Get in touch with me form Romancing the Beat is a story structure guide for romance writers written by Gwen Hayes. It is intended to help romance writers structure and outline their romance books. The story beats of the Romancing the Beat help romance writers craft the romance arc of their story and keep the readers interested in reading a story with a satisfying ending. The book is ideal for romance writers with all kinds of writing processes, such as pantsers, plotters and plantsers, who wish to write and improve the romantic elements of their story. The story structure guide is divided in 4 phases, and each phase takes about 25% of the story. Romancing the beat structure Phase 1:Setup The first phase takes about 20-25% of the story, and it introduces the main characters and the world. Introduce Your Main Characters
Meet Cute
No Way 1
Adhesion Plot Thrust
Phase 2: Falling in Love This is the second phase of the story and takes about 25% of the book. In phase 2, show that your main characters are meant to be together, even if they can’t see it yet. The main characters are going back and forth, getting one step closer and then backing away. Show that they are a better person by being with the other character. No Way 2
Inkling This Could Work
Deepening Desire
Maybe This Will Work
Midpoint of Love
Phase 3: Retreating from Love This is the third phase and takes about 25% of the story. Although the main character(s) realises that they can fall in love, they are stubborn and don’t want to change and overcome their internal flaw. Challenge your main character(s), push them and attack their soft spots. Exploit their internal flaw mentioned in the No Way beats. Provide them with reasons to doubt their decision in the previous beats to give love a chance. Inkling of Doubt
Deepening Doubt
Retreat
Shields up
Break Up
Phase 4:Fighting for Love This is the fourth phase and takes about 25% of the story. This is the last phase of the romance arc. The main characters realise that they are perfect for each other and want to get back together. Dark Night of the Soul
Catharsis
Grand Gesture
What Whole Hearted Looks Like
Epilogue
Final Thoughts Romancing the Beat by Gwen Hayes is a story structure guide that helps romance writers write compelling love stories. Have you used this guide to structure your romance stories? Comment below! Additional resources How to write a romance novel in 5 simple steps How to write a novel using the 3-act structure How to self-edit your romance novel Romancing the Beat by Gwen Hayes About the authorMaria Georgiou is a professional developmental editor and beta reader for romance authors. She specialises in editing contemporary romance, YA romance, romantic comedy, romantic suspense, paranormal romance and romantasy. She is a member of the EFA and ClubEdFreelancers. Learn more about the author: About me Get in touch: Facebook, LinkedIn, Bluesky Learn about fiction editing: Resources Library and Blog Get a quote for your writing project: Get in touch with me form Writing a romance novel is hard. It takes a lot of time, energy, determination, discipline and patience. Sometimes writers (especially new writers) get overwhelmed by the number of tasks that they need to do, or get lost in their story without knowing how to approach their story idea or what steps to take to finish their story. This blog article is intended to help all romance writers develop a straightforward process to successfully outline and write their romance novel in 5 simple steps. Step 1: Subgenre and tropes Step 2: Main character(s) and create character profiles Step 3: Story structure and chapter outlines Step 4: Setting and main locations Step 5: Start writing Step 1: Subgenre and tropes Before you decide your romance subgenre and tropes, it’s important to define what a romance story is. Romance is a very broad category and one of the most popular genres in fiction. A story is considered to belong to the romance genre when the romantic relationship between the main characters takes the centre of the story, and the story has a happy ending. If the story doesn’t have these 2 requirements, then it is not a romance story. The romance genre can be divided into many subgenres. Some of the most popular genres are contemporary romance, YA romance, historical romance, paranormal romance, romantasy, romantic suspense, LGBTQ+ romance, romantic comedy, and regency romance. If you are not sure which subgenre your story is or how to write a book in a specific subgenre, read books in that subgenre. The best way to learn more about how to write romance books is to read romance books. When you decide your romance sungenre, it’s time to choose the tropes of your romance story. A trope is a plot device that is used to create stories familiar to readers. Combine 2-3 main tropes in fresh ways to create an engaging story with compelling characters. Some of the most popular tropes for romance stories are:
Now, it’s time to decide the theme of your story. The theme is the message of your story. It is the lesson that the main character(s) learns at the end of the story that changes their perspective about themselves or the world around them. The theme must be universal, so that people regardless of age, gender, location and culture can relate to it. The main theme of romance stories is “love conquers all”, where the main characters must overcome their internal flaws and external obstacles to be happily together by the end of the story. What does “love conquer” in your story? Romance stories usually have specific themes related to the specific flaw the main character needs to overcome and learn by the end of the story. For example, does the main character need to forgive themselves for a traumatic past event, trust that others won’t betray them or fight against an injustice? The possibilities are endless, and it’s up to you to decide the specific theme of your story. Step 2: Main character(s) and create character profiles How many main characters does your story have? How many pov characters does your story have? The pov characters in romance stories are usually one or both of the main characters (love interests) of the story. Make sure to decide your main characters and pov characters before starting to write your story. Once you decide on your main characters, write down some important information about your characters. Create character profiles and include all the necessary information about all the characters of the story. Include your characters’ 3 most important elements:
In your character profiles, you can also include their:
Character profiles are a great way to help you write consistent, meaningful and fleshed-out characters. If you want to learn more about them, read why authors need character profiles. Step 3: Story structure and chapter outlines Once you find who your main characters are, create a separate document and start brainstorming the structure of your romance story. I highly recommend using Romancing the Beat by Gwen Hayes while you are outlining your romance story. Romancing the Beat is a popular story-structure guide that shows writers how to structure their romance story in 15 beats using the three-act structure. If you want to learn more about how to outline your romance story using Romancing the Beat, read the blog article on how to write a romance novel using the three-act structure. After you write down the story structure of your story, you can further outline your story by creating chapter outlines. Your chapter outlines can be as short or long as you want. For example, your chapter outlines can include only the main events of each chapter in bullet points, or each chapter can include long paragraphs with detailed descriptions and story events. Do what is more comfortable and helpful to you. Step 4: Setting and main locations Decide on the general setting of your story and write as many details as possible. Does your story take place in a big city, a small town or another planet? Is it a real or a fictional place? The choice of your setting depends on the subgenre of your story. After you decide the general setting of your story, you also need to decide specific locations. For example, some story events may happen in the main characters’ houses and their workplaces, or in cafes, restaurants and shops, depending on what kind of romance story you are writing. Make sure to note down any important elements of your setting and locations so that you can consistently describe them throughout your story. Step 5: Start writing Once you have decided your genre and tropes, main characters, story structure and setting of your writing project, it’s time to start writing your story. Find the best time of day for you to sit down and write your story. Note down on a calendar your work hours, obligations and appointments and look at the available time you have left each day. Note the available time in your calendar as your writing time. Try to write for at least 1 hour a day, but don’t discourage yourself if unexpected obligations keep you away from your allotted writing time. You can also create a timeline by writing down all the writing, editing and publishing tasks of your writing project and estimating how much time each task will take. Schedule monthly and weekly tasks and regularly check your writing progress to stay on track. If you want to learn more information, read how to create a consistent writing routine and finish writing your story. Conclusion Finishing writing and publishing a book can take months or even years. Don’t discourage yourself and don’t give up. Writing is a skill that takes practice and time to improve. Experiment and find your writing style. Be flexible and build habits that work for you. Write every day. Keep the momentum going and make your writing goals come true! Happy writing! Additional resources Why authors need character profiles How to write a romance novel using the 3-act structure How to create a consistent writing routine Romancing the Beat by Gwen Hayes About the authorMaria Georgiou is a professional developmental editor and beta reader for romance authors. She specialises in editing contemporary romance, YA romance, romantic comedy, romantic suspense, paranormal romance and romantasy. She is a member of the EFA and ClubEdFreelancers. Learn more about the author: About me Get in touch: Facebook, LinkedIn, Bluesky Learn about fiction editing: Resources Library and Blog Get a quote for your writing project: Get in touch with me form You wish to write a romance story. You have some ideas in your mind but you are not sure where each scene goes. In this blog article, you will learn how to structure your romance story based on the Save the Cat Writes a Young Adult Novel by Jessica Brody and Romancing the Beat by Gwen Hayes with the addition of my suggestions and examples. Save the Cat Writes a Young Adult Novel is a popular story-structure guide for fiction authors that analyses the 15 beats that make a successful story. It is originally intended for stories with young adult main characters but the same story structure can be used for romance stories. Romancing the Beat is a popular story-structure guide specifically for romance authors. This blog article includes: What is story structure? A note about the main character The beat sheet Act 1 Act 2A Act 2B Act 3 FAQ Conclusion What is story structure? Most storytelling structure is done in 3 acts that comprise the beginning, middle and end of the story. Act 1 is about 20% of the book. Act 2 is about 60% and Act 3 is about the remaining 20% of the book. Some authors prefer to divide Act 2 into two parts so that the whole story comprises four manageable chunks:
A note about the main character The main character of your story needs to have a goal, a flaw, and an internal transformation. The main characters in romance stories are the characters that the development of the romantic relationship is focused on. Romance stories are told from the point of view of the main characters. For each pov character, you will need to create a separate beat sheet with the 15 beats. All pov characters need to have a goal, flaw, internal transformation and (usually) equal page time. For the purposes of this blog article, the main character will be referred to as MC. If you want to learn more information about how to write your story’s genre, main characters and theme, read the article here. The beat sheet Here is the storytelling structure of your romance book: Act I 1) Opening Image (1%): This is the first scene or chapter of the story and shows a “before” picture of your MC and their world. 2) Theme Stated (5%): The theme is the lesson that your MC needs to learn by the end of the story. Around 5% of the story, a character states the theme of the story (the lesson that the MC needs to learn) and what is keeping your MC back from falling in love again (flaw). 3) Setup (1-10%): The first 10% of your story shows the status quo of your MC in all aspects of their life: home, work/school, and friends. Introduce your MC in a way that makes them interesting to the reader. Introduce your MC’s goal and flaw and their resistance to change (resistance to learn the theme of the story). Make sure that some kind of trouble is brewing or the MC is in the middle of something unexpected. Introduce other important supporting characters such as family, friends or coworkers. 4) Catalyst (10%): The inciting incident of the story happens to the MC and takes them into a “new world” or “new way of thinking”. The inciting incident should prevent the MC from returning to their status quo life. This is the first time that the MC meets their love interest on page (although some authors have the main characters meet earlier). This could be the first time they meet or they might already know each other e.g they could be classmates, coworkers, neighbors etc. The MC should describe the sparks and physical attractiveness between them, 5) Debate (10-20%): The MC thinks about what to do next in relation to the inciting incident. They might voice their concerns to a relative or a friend or internally think why they cannot fall in love, especially with the specific character. Provide the reason (the MC’s flaw) and add backstory to justify their beliefs. The MC should be “forced” to spend some time together with the love interest e.g they could be classmates forced to collaborate in a school project, coworkers working on the same team/project, or best friend’s older brother. Act 2A In Act 2A, the MC is still unwilling to change but you start raising doubts about their flaw. The reader should be able to see that the main characters are made for each other, even if they can’t see it yet. Each scene should deepen the sexual tension between them and the MC should realize that they are a better person with their love interest. Think of scenes where you will bring the two of them together emotionally and physically. Throughout Act 2A, the MC should take two steps forward and one step back. 6) Break Into 2 (20%): The beginning of Act 2. The MC decides to leave the status quo and dive into a new world. 7) B story* (22%): Introduce new characters that will help the MC learn the theme of the story (e.g a friend, a coworker, a relative) at the beginning of Act 2 (20-25%). If you have already introduced them in Act 1, there is no point in introducing a new character just for the sake of religiously following the story structure. *(The A story is an external plot and the B story is about the internal transformation of the MC). 8) Fun and Games (20-50%): The MC lives into the new world. The MC is after something they think they want and not what they need and they are trying to fix their life the wrong way. Think about your MC and their Act 2 life. How is their life in Act 2? Is it better or worse? Do they love this new world do they hate it?
9) Midpoint (50%): This is the middle of your story. This is the beat where your MC has opened their hearts in a way that they didn’t previously. They might tell their friends about the night they spend with the love interest or they might have some internal thoughts about how right it feels. This beat is a false victory. The Midpoint could also be the place where the MC and the love interest have their first kiss or declare their love to each other. The Midpoint should make your MC get further out of their comfort zone and put more pressure on them to internally change. The Midpoint could serve as a ticking clock where an upcoming test, performance or event will determine the MC’s future, it could be a celebration, a competition, or a major plot twist. The Midpoint shifts the focus of the story and makes the MC rethink everything about their life and their goals. Act 2B Act 2A finishes on a false victory. The MC is starting to admit their feelings and they realize that they can fall in love but they haven’t overcome the flaw that is holding them back yet. In Act 2B, you have to push your MC and begin targeting their flaw. For example, if your MC doesn’t want to fall in love again because they believe that all men or women cheat, then you are going to hit them with that. You can include scenes where the MC misunderstands and believes that their love interest has cheated on them. 10) Bad guys Close In (50-75%): This is the part of the story where things are getting worse and worse for your MC both externally and internally. Externally, the MC needs to fight the bad guys of the story e.g parents, teachers, coworkers, witches, or vampires. Internally, the MC needs to fight with their own internal beliefs and flaws. Your Midpoint was a false victory, so this beat should have a downward path.
11) All is Lost (75%): In this beat, a major event happens to your MC that brings them to their lowest point of the story e.g a breakup. The breakup scene needs to be tied with the flaw of the MC who chooses fear instead of love. The MC loses someone or something that is usually related to their flaw.
12) Dark Night of the Soul (75-80%): The MC reacts to the events of the All is Lost beat. Show the MC’s emotions. The MC should feel worse and any progress they made towards overcoming their flaw feels lost. The MC tries to return to their old, familiar world of Act 1, but they are not the same person they were in Act 1 since the events of the story have already internally changed them. The MC realizes that the breakup is their fault. Act 3 In Act 3, the MC learns the theme of the story (overcomes their flaw) and fixes things the right way. The MC could have realized that they should continue pursuing the same goal they had since the beginning of the story or they might have a new goal for Act 3. The goal should be related to the story’s theme. 13) Break Into 3 (80%): The aha moment. The scene where the MC figures out what they need to do to fix things the right way and decides to take the first step on that action. The MC realizes that the breakup was their fault. They have had some advice from friends or family in the previous scene and they realize that they have to let go of their flaw and choose love this time. The MC realizes that they have the power to be happy and they decide to try to win back the love interest they have lost even if they believe it might be too late. 14) Finale (80-95%): The MC executes the plan about the decision they made on Break Into 3 and they prove that they have learned the theme of the story and that they have been internally transformed. The MC has an epiphany and is ready to be courageous to win their love back. In order to do that, they need to perform a grand gesture, an action that shows how serious and how much in love they are. The grand gesture can be related to overcoming a specific fear: e.g the MC is afraid of airplanes but they get into a plane to confess their love. Other common grand gestures can include a public confession of love with the risk of being rejected and humiliated or sacrificing their goal to see the other character’s dream come true. 15) Final Image (99-100%): This is the final scene of your story and it shows an “after” picture of your MC’s life and how much they have changed. Show their whole-hearted selves. The Final Image can be a mirror image of their first encounter, their first date, their first kiss or any other important moment for them. You might choose to write an epilogue so that might be the final scene of your novel. An epilogue can show a glimpse of the future with a wedding or babies. The Final Image doesn't need to be “perfect.” You just have to show the MC living a happy life together with their lover. FAQ Where do I start outlining my story? Start outlining your story using the five Foundation Beats. The Foundation beats are single-scene beats and the most important beats of your story structure. The five foundation beats are:
The five foundation beats will help you create an outline for your story either before or while writing your story.If you are a plotter, you can start creating the outline of your story by filling first the five foundation beats and then writing as much information as you can in the other beats.If you are a pantser, you can write 1-2 sentences for each foundation beat and then complete your beat sheet as you write the story. If you are a new author and you haven’t established a writing routine yet, I would recommend writing 2-3 sentences in each foundation beat to have a general sense of your story and then start writing your story. As you write, observe with how much preparation you feel comfortable as an author. Some authors want to have complete character profiles and detailed story-structure outlines before they start writing their story. Others prefer to have a general idea of how their story starts and they immediately start writing with little or no notes at all. Start by taking a few notes and experiment until you find what is comfortable for you. Conclusion This blog article explains the story structure for romance stories. The beat sheet and the 15 beat points analyzed in this article are only meant to guide you in creating successful romance stories. Don’t think of them as obligatory plot points but rather as suggestions that can inspire you and show a way to create a successful plot structure for your story. If you want to learn more about plot and story structure, I highly recommend reading the Save the Cat Writes a Young Adult Novel by Jessica Brody and Romancing the Beat by Gwen Hayes. Happy writing! Further reading How to brainstorm your novel’s genre and main characters How character profiles can help you write consistent and compelling characters How to create a consistent writing routine About the authorMaria Georgiou is a professional developmental editor for romance authors. She specialises in editing contemporary romance, YA romance, romantic suspense, paranormal romance and romantasy. She is a member of the EFA and ClubEdFreelancers. Learn more about the author: About me Get in touch: Facebook and LinkedIn Learn about fiction editing: Resources Library and Blog Get a quote for your writing project: Get in touch with me form |
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About the authorMaria Georgiou is a professional developmental editor and beta reader for romance authors. She specialises in editing contemporary romance, YA romance, romantic comedy, romantic suspense, paranormal romance, fantasy romance and romantasy stories. She is a member of the EFA, ClubEdFreelancers and ALLi. |